Ithaka
Dear Tony,
Cavafy is one of my favourite poets too. And Ithaka a most beloved poem.
Since I cannot read Greek, I am never satisfied with the various translations I find of the poem. Would you help me write one version of it?
Here:
ITHAKA
When setting out upon your way to Ithaca,
wish always that your course be long,
full of adventure, full of lore.
Of the Laestrygones and of the Cyclopes,
of an irate Poseidon never be afraid;
such things along your way you will not find,
if lofty is your thinking, if fine sentiment
in spirit and in body touches you.
Neither Laestrygones nor Cyclopes,
nor wild Poseidon will you ever meet,
unless you bear them in your soul,
unless your soul has raised them up in front of you.
Wish always that your course be long;
that many there be of summer morns
when with such pleasure, such great joy,
you enter ports now for the first time seen;
that you may stop at some Phoenician marts,
to purchase there the best of wares,
mother-of-pearl and coral, amber, ebony,
hedonic perfumes of all sorts--
as many such hedonic perfumes as you can;
that you may go to various Egyptian towns
to learn, and learn from those schooled there.
Your mind should ever be on Ithaca.
Your reaching there is your prime goal.
But do not rush your journey anywise.
Better that it should last for many years,
and that, now old, you moor at Ithaca at last,
a man enriched by all you gained upon the way,
and not expecting Ithaca to give you further wealth.
For Ithaca has given you the lovely trip.
Without her you would not have set your course.
There is no more that she can give.
If Ithaca seems then too lean, you have not been deceived.
As wise as you are now become, of such experience,
you will have understood what Ithaca stands for.
Best,
H.
Cavafy is one of my favourite poets too. And Ithaka a most beloved poem.
Since I cannot read Greek, I am never satisfied with the various translations I find of the poem. Would you help me write one version of it?
Here:
ITHAKA
When setting out upon your way to Ithaca,
wish always that your course be long,
full of adventure, full of lore.
Of the Laestrygones and of the Cyclopes,
of an irate Poseidon never be afraid;
such things along your way you will not find,
if lofty is your thinking, if fine sentiment
in spirit and in body touches you.
Neither Laestrygones nor Cyclopes,
nor wild Poseidon will you ever meet,
unless you bear them in your soul,
unless your soul has raised them up in front of you.
Wish always that your course be long;
that many there be of summer morns
when with such pleasure, such great joy,
you enter ports now for the first time seen;
that you may stop at some Phoenician marts,
to purchase there the best of wares,
mother-of-pearl and coral, amber, ebony,
hedonic perfumes of all sorts--
as many such hedonic perfumes as you can;
that you may go to various Egyptian towns
to learn, and learn from those schooled there.
Your mind should ever be on Ithaca.
Your reaching there is your prime goal.
But do not rush your journey anywise.
Better that it should last for many years,
and that, now old, you moor at Ithaca at last,
a man enriched by all you gained upon the way,
and not expecting Ithaca to give you further wealth.
For Ithaca has given you the lovely trip.
Without her you would not have set your course.
There is no more that she can give.
If Ithaca seems then too lean, you have not been deceived.
As wise as you are now become, of such experience,
you will have understood what Ithaca stands for.
Best,
H.

6 Comments:
i wanna help too-oo-oo!!
¿y si juntamos varias versiones? ¿puedo entrometerme? ¿puedo buscar hoy en casa?
lemme know.
PERO CLARO!!!! MÁS QUE BIENVENIDO!!!
Qué chido!!
Oye, R. Quiero hacer lo mismo con distintas recopilaciones de "La Llorona", me ayudas?
oye, perdona la ignorancia pero cuál llorona? :o(
CÓMO QUE CUÁL LLORONA!!! LA LLORONA! ....
ok, ok, tienes razón, ese es justo el problema! hay tantas versiones!
Esa tremendísima rola oaxaqueña querido! LA llorona!
Esa que puede empezar así:
Salías del templo un día, Llorona...
Hm.. perhaps! My Greek isn't as good as it once was...
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